Done-for-You

Memoir Revision


Your story matters—and how it’s told matters just as much.

Writing a memoir means working with material that is deeply personal, often complicated, and sometimes painful to revisit. The fact that you’ve written the draft at all is not incidental—it reflects courage, commitment, and the belief that this story deserves to exist beyond you. Done-for-you memoir revision honors that reality. This work is not about stripping your experience of its truth or sanding it into something marketable at all costs. It’s about shaping lived experience into a narrative that can be received—by readers, agents, and acquisitions editors—without losing its emotional integrity or authority. Your story matters. My role is to help it land with clarity, intention, and care.

You already know your life story—but are struggling to shape it into a book. Or you’ve taken a draft as far as you can and are running into barriers on submission: vague feedback, form rejections, or uncertainty about where the memoir fits in the market. You bring the lived experience. I bring decades of narrative craft, editorial judgment, and industry insight, so the story on the page matches the power of what you’ve lived.

Let’s say you’ve written the draft. Revised it, probably more than once. You know there’s something meaningful here… but also that something isn’t quite working. This is where most memoirists stall—not because they lack honesty, courage, or insight, but because professional-level memoir revision is no longer about “telling the truth better.” It’s about shaping meaning.

Seeing the manuscript clearly—structurally, emotionally, ethically, and commercially—and making decisive, confident changes that transform lived experience into a compelling, readable, publishable narrative. Many writers can’t bring this perspective to their own memoirs because they’re too close to the material. A done-for-you memoir ghost revision allows an experienced editor to see both the story as lived and the story as read—and bring them into alignment on the page.


WHAT done-for-you REVISION IS … AND ISN’T

Collaborating with an expert editor and writer on a memoir ghost revision isn’t:

  • A critique letter with abstract advice

  • A sensitivity read or validation pass

  • A line edit that preserves deeper structural problems

  • A therapeutic or confessional process

What it is:

  • Hands-on, paragraph-by-paragraph revision by a former literary agent and career editor

  • Structural and narrative shaping that clarifies meaning, scope, and arc

  • Active rewriting to sharpen voice, establish authority, clarify stakes, and sustain momentum

  • A resulting manuscript that reads with intention, coherence, and emotional precision

By engaging me to execute a done-for-you revision, you don’t just get feedback on what isn’t working. You get an expert who actively resolves those issues on the page—so you can see the decisions, understand the craft, and move forward with clarity and confidence.


Done-for-you memoir revision is best suited for writers who:

  • Have a complete draft (or are very close)

  • Know the story matters but aren’t confident the book works yet

  • Keep hearing that the manuscript is “interesting, but…”

  • Want professional-level execution without years of stalled revision

  • Value clarity, authority, emotional restraint, and narrative momentum

Many of my clients at this stage are:

  • Debut memoirists pursuing traditional publication

  • Writers with powerful life material who struggle with structure or scope

  • Authors who have been told the memoir is “too much,” “not enough,” or “unclear”

  • Writers who want to learn by seeing expert revision in action

WHO THIS SERVICE IS FOR


my OBJECTIVE with every ghost revision

Every project is different, but my memoir revision service almost always involves a focus on:

  • Narrative spine: Clarifying what the memoir is actually about—and ensuring every chapter earns its place in service of that central meaning.

  • Authorial authority: Establishing a confident, grounded narrative stance that invites reader trust without overexplaining or defensiveness.

  • Emotional arc: Shaping an intentional emotional journey for the reader—not just recounting events, but guiding meaning, reflection, and transformation.

  • Scope & focus: Determining what belongs in the book—and what doesn’t—so the memoir feels cohesive rather than exhaustive.

  • Voice consistency: Refining tone so the voice feels controlled, intentional, and sustainable across the manuscript.

  • Pacing & momentum: Especially in opening chapters and reflective passages where memoirs often stall.

  • Market awareness: Positioning the memoir clearly within the contemporary nonfiction landscape—without trend-chasing or diluting the book’s identity.

This is the level of revision agents and acquisitions editors expect—but rarely have time to shepherd writers toward. I help you achieve it so your memoir has its strongest possible shot in a demanding, competitive market.


How done-for-you memoir revision works

Step One: Manuscript Intake and Evaluation

I read the full draft and assess what kind of revision will best serve the memoir. We then meet to discuss the manuscript, identify its core throughline, and align on scope, structure, and intent. This is where the biggest decisions are made—and where trust and creative alignment are established. Once we’re aligned, I begin revising directly within the manuscript.

I revise the manuscript on the page—reshaping chapters, clarifying narrative stance, strengthening transitions, and integrating reflection with story. The first three chapters are presented early so you can review and approve the revision’s direction. You’ll also receive strategic notes explaining why changes were made, not just what changed.

Step Two: Hands-on revision

Once we’re aligned on the execution of the opening chapters, I complete the full manuscript revision with any additional direction you’ve provided. After reviewing the draft, you may request up to two additional revision rounds, for a total of three passes, focused on refinement rather than re-envisioning.

Step Three: The Complete Manuscript

Once the final manuscript is approved, I provide guidance on next steps—traditional submission, independent publishing, or platform-building strategy. Every memoir ghost revision includes a professionally written query and synopsis, informed by my experience as a former literary agent. (Some agents request a book proposal format for your pitch, and this is also available.)

Step Four: Strategy and Guidance


This is not a one-size-fits-all process. My scope, depth, and approach are tailored to the manuscript and life story in front of me. I take on a limited number of done-for-you revision projects each year to ensure the focus and care this work requires. If you’re looking for clarity, decisive revision, and a memoir that feels like your very best self on the page, let’s talk.

fit and availability


Done-for-you memoir revision projects begin at $50,000 for manuscripts of up to 70,000 words. This includes a series of onboarding interviews, comprehensive, hands-on revision of the full manuscript, as well as up to 10,000 words of new drafting, where necessary. The majority of this writing is generated through substantial revision and reworking of existing material rather than additive expansion. This pricing structure reflects the depth of creative, structural, and editorial labor involved and is calibrated for writers seeking expert-level revision with clear scope, momentum, and results. Longer or more complex projects may involve additional fees.

INVESTMENT

For writers who want to remain creatively involved but no longer want to carry the manuscript on their own, memoir ghostwriting may be the better fit. This option is designed for projects that require sustained authorship-level execution—whether due to the scope of the life material, limited time or emotional bandwidth, or the complexity of shaping lived experience into a coherent narrative. Full ghostwriting engagements involve deep collaboration, original drafting across the manuscript, and strategic framing from the ground up.

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Mary is highly professional and a delight to work with. She gets right into the hearts and minds of the characters, inspires you in a way that you have no alternative but to give your best. I recommend her to aspiring and expert writers.
— Fida
Mary has a gift. She takes the story she is given, as an entire entity and picks it apart in a way that truly teaches the writer why elements work or don’t work together. If you are serious about getting published, then Mary Kole is the one to do this with. She is a partner, literature expert and knows what works and what doesn’t. I highly recommend her to any expert or aspiring writer.
— Agnes